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5 Sentences for the Maiko Conspiracy. Now with fresh typos!

1. scar
Shaozu was handsome, but not without flaw; there were many small elliptical scars on his sides and stomach, little more than discolorations in his skin, and it was only one night after he had fallen asleep and Kaguya started to match them with her fingertips that she realized where they'd come from, but she never knew why.

2. shadow
Ty Lee knew that she was being watched and that someone constantly dogged her footsteps, but when she saw the shadows flit through the night, she only smiled and thought it was nice that Mai still cared.

3. darkness
Inwardly he knew that keeping her trapped in the dark was worse than killing her, but if her penance was to remain in the dark without sun and heat, his was to sit and watch and ache as she dwindled into nothing.

4. barren
Dan Dan didn't like deceiving Mama Mai, but Zuko had made her promise, and the mechanics of the task were far easier than the heartache that performing it forced her to bear.

SENTENCE FIVE IS ABOUT HIKA AND [livejournal.com profile] squarewhore WILL WRITE THAT.

Date: 2006-11-27 03:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ameonna.livejournal.com
5. joy
She spun under the water, with her arms spread wide and her face uptilted, laughing, and they wondered how anyone could have ever hated people like this enough to kill them.

Date: 2006-11-27 03:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] birdsarecalling.livejournal.com
These are very cool, but #4 confuses me. Is she pretending to be barren? Pretending NOT to be barren? Why would she need to pretend to Mai either way?

I feel that Ty Lee knows she is being followed, and allows it, but periodically beats her persuers up just to let Mai KNOW that she knows.

Date: 2006-11-27 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ameonna.livejournal.com
We will explain #4 soon in a ficlet, I am sure. :)

I agree, but I still think she appreciates the gesture.


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